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              EXT. DENISE'S HOUSE - DAY

               A small car pulls up in the driveway. IT has a magnet sign
               listed . A Spanish woman gets out of the car and walks to
               the passenger side. She opens the Door and picks up her
               chihuahua and walks towards the home.

               She has on a cleaning uniform on with white shoes. The
               little chihuahua has a white coat matching her uniform. She
               walks to the front door and unlocks it.


               INT. DENISE'S HOUSE - DAY

               She walks inside and places her dog on the floor. The dog
               runs straight upstairs. She looks up.

                                     MAID
                               (Yells)
                         CHI CHI. Get down here, right now!

               The Maid sees the kitchen a  mess and walks towards the
               refrigerator. She sees Denise's purse on the table.

                                     MAID
                               (Yells)
                         Miss Martin, I'm going to get
                         started in the kitchen!
                         (Beat)
                         HELLO!

               The dog begins to bark as the Maid walks towards the stairs.
               The Maid begins to feel uncomfortable. She starts to walk
               with caution.

                                     MAID
                               (Worried)
                         Miss Martin, are you awake?
                         (Beat)
                         Hello?

               The Maid sees the bedroom door cracked open. Chi Chi comes
               running out the door with her noise red with blood and a
               piece of meat in her mouth. The maid bends over and picks up
               her dog.

                                     MAID
                         What do you have there?

               She pulls a piece of meat out of Chi Chi's mouth. She
               examines it and drops it. Her heart drops to the floor as
               her face turns white. She slowly walks towards the bedroom
               with her dog in her arm. She pushes the door open slowly.

                                     MAID
                         Denise?

               The door slowly opens. The room is red with blood. Denise's
               head is lying right next to the maids feet. The Maid SCREAMS
               WITH FEAR.

                                     MAID
                         O MY GOD!!!

               She drops the dog. The dog plops to the floor and runs down
               stairs. The maid places her hands over her face SCREAMING in
               disbelief.

               She turns around and runs down stairs and grabs her cell
               phone and calls the police.


               EXT. DENISE'S HOUSE - DAY

               Cop cars fill the street. The crime scene tape is being ran
               across the yard. Captain Bowls is walking with one of the
               police officers that acted on the 911 call.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         What happen here?

                                     COP 2
                         Someone broke in the home last
                         night and killed a man and a woman
                         upstairs. We believe it was Denise
                         Martin and Dave Anderson. But we
                         don't know for sure.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         What do you mean you don't know
                         for sure?

                                     COP 2
                         Their bodies are in pieces and
                         disfigured. We think the couple
                         was strangle to death first, then
                         chopped into pieces.

               The Captain shakes his head with frustration. He places his
               hands on his hip.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         SHIT!!!

               Seth is seen walking up to the home from his car. He stares
               at the house with an anxious look. He walks straight to
               Captain Bowls.

                                     SETH
                         Who is it this time?

                                     CAPTAIN
                         We believe it is Denise Martin and
                         Dave Anderson. But the bodies are
                         hard to identify. They were
                         strangled then chopped up into
                         pieces.

                                     SETH
                         Wait. Did you say Denise Martin.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         Yes, that's who we think it is
                         anyway.

                                     SETH
                         That's one of Sarah's friends.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         We'll, I wouldn't mention anything
                         to her. She has to much to worry
                         about already.

                                     SETH
                         I don't think that should be a
                         problem. She wasn't very fond of
                         her to start with.

               Seth takes a look around to see if anything was left behind
               from the killer.

                                     SETH
                         Any witnesses.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         None. Not a single one.

               A crime scene investigator walks quickly out of the front
               door of the home. He has a VIDEO RECORDER in his hand. He
               walks towards the Captain and opens the side of the camera
               with a white glove.

                                     INVESTIGATOR
                         It looks like this couple loved to
                         tape themselves having sex. This
                         was found behind a picture on a
                         dresser.

               The Captain rewinds the tape and pushes play. We see the
               couple having sex and the Strangler walks into the room.

                                     SETH
                         Wait! Rewind it.
                         (Beat)
                         Stop. Push play.
                         (Beat)
                         Pause it.

               The Captain pauses it right when the Strangler walks into
               the room.

                                     SETH (CONT'D)
                               (Excited)
                         It's the Strangler. Look you can
                         see his eye.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         It's him alright.

               The Captain closes the camera and gives it back to the
               Investigator.

                                     CAPTAIN (CONT'D)
                         Keep this with the rest of the
                         evidence you have.

                                     INVESTIGATOR
                         Sure, no problem.

               The Investigator takes the camera and walks back inside.
               Seth's phone rings.

                                     SETH
                         Hello?
                         (Beat)
                         Hey, Sarah

               Seth turns away from the Captain and starts to walk towards
               the street.

                                     SETH
                         I will stop by around eight.
                         (Beat)
                         Alright no problem but, I have to
                         go, so I'll see you then.
                         (Beat)
                         OK Bye.

               Seth walks back to where the Captain is. The Captain is
               looking at a few footprints left in the mud next to the
               bushes.

                                     SETH
                         Have you been inside?

                                     CAPTAIN
                         Not yet.

               Seth walks towards the front door.


               INT. DENISE'S HOUSE - DAY

               The home is surrounded by CITY OFFICIALS. Seth looks towards
               a woman who is taking pictures of the kitchen.

                                     SETH
                         Where are the bodies?

                                     WOMAN 2
                         Upstairs, in the master bedroom.

               Seth walks towards the stairs. He grabs the rail with his
               white glove and pauses for a moment and closes his eyes. He
               tries to get in tune with the killer. He wants to see what
               the killer was seeing. His eyes open with a look of madness.
               He feels a source of power from within.

               He starts to take every footstep that the killer took. He
               looks towards the master bedroom. He sees the door slightly
               open. He slowly moves the door open and sees that the room
               is covered with blood. Both bodies and parts are marked with
               numbers and two men are walking around taking pictures.

               Seth stands at the doorway trying to imagine exactly what
               happen through his mind. The room transforms back to where
               Denise and Dave where having sex. Seth quietly steps forward
               and moves towards Dave. He stands behind Dave and places his
               hands around him as if he was strangling him.

               He acts like he places the body on the floor. He looks
               towards Denise and grabs her by the throat. He sees a hole
               in the wall and moves towards it. He throws his arm towards
               the wall as if he just smashed her head in.

               Seth pictures in his mind how Denise would kick and claw at
               his face. He quickly snaps out of it and looks to the
               ground. He sees small pieces of skin with bone shaving. He
               turns towards the bedroom door and walks out.

                                                       CUT TO:


               EXT. DENISE'S HOUSE - DAY

               Seth is seen walking out the front door in a hurry. The
               Captain stares at him as he is walking by.

                                     CAPTAIN
                         Seth, is everything OK?

                                     SETH
                         Yeah, I just need some time to
                         think.

               Seth continues towards his car and gets inside and drives
               off in a hurry. The investigator walks towards the Captain.

                                     INVESTIGATOR
                         Is he going to be alright?

                                     CAPTAIN
                         Yeah, I think so. He just blames
                         himself for not catching these
                         killers before they pick there
                         next victim.

                                     INVESTIGATOR
                         Maybe, he should take some time
                         off.

               Beat.

                                     CAPTAIN
                               (Shakes his head)
                         He won't, not until he puts them
                         behind bars.


               INT. SETH'S HOUSE - NIGHT

               We see Seth pull up to his home from inside his bedroom
               through the window. He walks in from the front door. He
               walks to the kitchen and checks the answering machine. No
               messages.

               Seth pulls out a glass from the sink. He grabs a bottle of
               VODKA from the counter. He pours it in the glass until it's
               half full. He slams it and places the glass on the counter
               and fills it up half way again. He slams it down and places
               the glass in the sink.

               HE walks upstairs to the bedroom. He unbuttons his shirt and
               turns the shower on. He stares into the mirror.

                                     SETH
                         Your loosing it. Get it together
                         DAM IT. What the hell is wrong
                         with you, you're supposed to be
                         the best.

                                                       CUT TO:


               INT. JASMINE'S HOUSE - NIGHT

               Sarah is in the bedroom going through Jasmine's closet
               looking for some clothes. She finds a dark blue dress that
               stops at the knees.

                                     SARAH
                         What do you think about this one?

                                     JASMINE
                         That'll look good on you. I
                         haven't worn that dress in years.

               Sarah turns to a long mirror on the closet door. She places
               it against her body. The blue dress flows along with her
               shape.

                                     JASMINE (CONT'D)
                         So, where you two going tonight?

                                     SARAH
                         I don't know. I think I might try
                         to see if we can have dinner at
                         his place. I really don't feel
                         like going out.

                                     JASMINE


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