Dear fellow aatmans,

Here is me giving a shot at something different. Hope , you would bear with it :)

Please Do let me know your thoughts.

CAVEAT: This is my first ever attempt

Aye Young man,
You Seeketh that One moment of pride,
You seeketh that fleeting time amidst mansions
Your mind , jumping like a monkey
From One Object to another.

Aye young man,
You give your ears to all kinds of noise.
Your eyes, unaware of the demon veiled by illusion
Your tongue failing to sense the life in food
What do you seeketh after all?

Aye young man,
Let your mind to think about Hari
Your Voice anointing him with the fragrance of the Saptha Swaras
Gifting your ears with the sweetness of NadaBrahmam (Divine Sound)
Casting your mind upon Hari, Before eating the first morsel of Food.
You ask, What else would I seeketh ??

UPDATE :

Tamil Translation:


Adiyen , Oru vaasgarin virupathal , meLirikkum Aangila Kavithayai Mozhipeyarka Muyandrirukkiren. Pizhaigazhai Manithu Karuthezhuthavum :)

Naadinaan, andha oru gana perumaiyai
Thedinaan, andha aranmanai Vaazhkayai
KurangaiPOl , avan manam , Oru poruzhil Oru ganam
Maru Poruzhil Maruganam

Sevikku , pala vidha AravAram
Peyai ariyaa maayayil avanin KanGaL
Unavil Uyir Ariyaa Avan Naaku
Ivaigazhai Naaduvathen?

Kamalakkannanin visayil Nin Manam
Iniya sapthaswarangazhal andha Vaasudevanai abishekhum Nin Kural
naadhabramathAl , madhurathil nin sevigal
Unbatharku mun , nin manam Avan visaiyil
VerEythum Nin Manam Naadumaa?

Sri SitaRamachandraarpanam
Sri Krishnaarpanam