At the end of last year, an edit of my 'finished' novel, Just Say It, highlighted I had a problem with multiple point of views, I largely ignored it, until I received the latest critique, which not only highlighted the multiple POV's issue, but it also pointed out that I was also guilty of another writer's crime, authorial Intrusion.  So I need to back off, and let my characters do the talking!

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